Sunday, April 29, 2012

A Poem, Didn't Feel Rappy



My Pain 

I can't even think the name
Without feeling pain
And the sorrow of regret

All my attempts were in vain
I feel so insane
I feel like a piece of shit

I loved her once and always will
My heart goes to her because I feel
A burning passion I can't put out
Only her bucket of water, but I'm without

My heart was shattered, broken, smashed
And at my friends I decided to lash
I need them more than ever

And she stood there, spurning me
So I took my leave
And she'll never be my lover

-Caucasian Azn                 .

I tried to use Haiku in this which only worked for the first two verses but, there is a rhyming aspect even though it is strained. But the rhyming works the way I always made it work in rapping, it doesn't have to be exactly a rhyme, just close enough.

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